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Jon is starting to gain some weight, how does his little brother react?
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Man, even after all this time, this story still makes me cry. Having a character die is an easy and sometimes cheap way to get your audience to cry, but two brothers who loved each other and were best friends, come to fall apart and turn into enemies, man, the way you wrote it, it truly made me cry. And then when they get back together at the end and become friends again? Oh, those waterworks.

Man, I really cried a lot when I first read this, and I still cried now after all this time. I really do like this story and the chapter that came after this, and I do wish you would continue the story and make Bigger Brothers 3.